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Alone I am left here.
Everyone else has moved on.

I’m chained to this moment.
Afraid to move.
Afraid to change.

The world fades away,
And I am left with nothing.
Nothing but memories.
Memories of our time together.
©2004-2009 ~mls4911
:iconmls4911:

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I wrote this a couple of months ago when I was feeling really down.

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:iconmagicaldeviantjew64:
I genuinely like this poem--short but sweet. You say so much in so few words.

Well done.

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I' mi son un' che, quando Amor mi spira, noto, e a quel modo ch'e' ditta dentro, vo significando.
:iconmls4911:
Thanks I just sat down one day and started writing and this came out.

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In the kingdom of the blind, the one-eyed man is king."
-Desiderius Erasmus
:iconlostintheabyss:
i just have to say... good choice in avatars... THE CHEAT!!!
ok im a big hoestar dork.. my fav charecter stongbad.. lol

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"Vayne man," sayd she, "that doest in vaine assay.
A mortall thing so to immortalize,
For I my selve shall lyke to this decay,
and eek my name bee wyped out lykewize."

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:iconfoolishheart:
I’m chained to this moment.
Afraid to move.
Afraid to change.

I know that feeling all too well.
Nicely written :D

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Brittany
**~~livingpoetsociety~**
:iconmls4911:
Thanks I really like how this one turned out. By the way how are you? I hope everything is going well.

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In the kingdom of the blind, the one-eyed man is king."
-Desiderius Erasmus
:iconleeku:
missing you [link]
Sadness

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Dream and as you Dream, Remember only you can make your Dreams come True

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