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Where are you? by ~mls4911:iconmls4911:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Old Poetry Structure > Dark


Where are you?
I sit here.
I wait.
You never return.

I search for you, frantic.
Why aren’t you here
Like you’re supposed to be
With me?

Where did you go?
Why are you hiding?
You’re gone beyond my reach
Somewhere far, far away.

Why did you leave?
You’re absence cuts my heart.
It bleeds out its love.
Now I am empty.
©2003-2009 ~mls4911
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Submitted: December 11, 2003
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Feeling really depressed and lonely all of a sudden.
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~Sedjem-Ash:iconSedjem-Ash: Dec 11, 2003, 4:09:10 AM
Wow, this is really saddeningly beautiful, I hope everything becomes better soon, you deserve it. Very well-written, and something I can relative very much so with. Very good writing.
~mls4911:iconmls4911: Dec 11, 2003, 1:15:28 PM
Thank you. I hope so too.
~Sedjem-Ash:iconSedjem-Ash: Dec 11, 2003, 1:56:12 PM
You're welcome! Keep it up! Keep it real! :D
~mls4911:iconmls4911: Dec 16, 2003, 8:26:15 PM
Thanks Brittany, I needed that.
~Handcuffs:iconHandcuffs: Jan 7, 2004, 12:27:09 AM
I felt this way not very long ago. It sucked! I hope you have fallen into better times. :)

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~mls4911:iconmls4911: Jan 7, 2004, 2:02:15 AM
Thanks. I have for the most part.
~Handcuffs:iconHandcuffs: Jan 13, 2004, 8:11:30 PM
Keep the chin up. Women come and then they go sigh :)

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promoting good health while smoking a cigarette, eating a twinky and drinking a bottle of gin. ;)
~putrefy:iconputrefy: Jun 2, 2004, 5:15:04 AM
:) i like this

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